"To cycle in itself is an activity strongly "green" in all cases non-polluting and therefore good for our environment. But can the same be said of its manufacture, I do not think so.
Even if the environmental costs of manufacturing a bicycle is not equivalent to that of a car, it still has an impact, albeit small, if only to make the many pieces of metal or plastic that composed.
So this manufacturer located in Portland has said it would be good to finally get rid of the bulk metal, ie the frame, and replace it with wood ...!."
RENOVO as we believe that wood is the future of cycling, now more a work of art, it is a lifestyle.
So we tenoning to add our expertise with that of Renovo in the creation of a more "green".
So, congratulation Renovo
welcome to my student blog of the new brand of MTB: AIR-BIKE
Good start.
RépondreSupprimer2 points - You're missing an introduction about your company & you have NOT identified this clearly enough as a student blog. This is important to do on the home page.
Also I want you to list the 4 -5 blogs you'll be following, the "reference blogs" in the introduction. I'm not interested in you posting as you (as interesting as your opinions might be). I don't want you just to create a newsletter on the subject, I want you to create a role in a company / entity that speaks for that enterprise... to create sales, to position the entity as an expert in the field, etc. You will be asked to create content as if you are the spokesperson for that entity, to defend their interests, promote their objectives, etc. Who will you blog as? What is your role in the company?
What is the real-world" model for your new virtual company?
Remember, I don't want YOUR opinions, I want you to blog in the interests of the company or entity.
The first entry should include a critique of an article:
Define the sector and focus of your blog
Name the real companies who’s blog you’ll be following – your “reference blogs”
Pull in one story from one of those blogs and critique it
Who is the author writing as? Himself, or a company voice?
How trustworthy is the blog entry? IS the author credible, objective, or serving the corporate communications point of view
What does it appear the corporate objectives are for the blog (refer to the list of questions in class notes 1, page 20.
Good Luck